God dammit Dreamland Chronicles, if you're underwater you don't fall, you sink. She'd slowly float down, or better yet, swim away, not plummet to her doom.

Dreamland Chronicles has a few good ideas and a lot of long, drawn out action sequences. He inists on showing you every single little detail in an action sequence, killing the pacing for the webcomic and frustrating readers who can't believe they tune in day after day to only to get updates with an inkling of action/plot progression.

The reason for this is because Dreamland Chronicles is primarily in book form. You can buy them and then flip through these unending action scenes with a turning of a physical page, not the loading of an immaterial browser (and subsequently the wait of days and weeks).